Moody Профиль пользователя ID: 123972

I think the biggest problem of the edit is that it is misdirected. The music is building up but the images do not. The visuals could be an outro of some sort. I like fragmovies/clips having meaning and the advice isn't wrong at all. What bothers me is that the video doesn't give me a chance to feel it before even reading it. The advice is more like a conclusion at the beginning where it clearly shouldn't be. The following scenes are beautifully edited together. So much good work was put into this. What I'll need to say is that the sound effects can be distracting sometimes and the level of the music is thrown around like a toy. If I want to feel the sound it needs to be more persistent. Then the edit leads to nowhere and there is a seemingly random (but impressive!) wormhole without a goal and you don't understand why it is there or how it is connected to the rest of the theme.

This is good. But the second part wasn't really my thing. Very enjoyable intro though!