The tEGO clip was very cool
great flow and nice cc, but feels like you've used the same cc over the clip
because it fits perfects on train and cpl_mill but in tuscan and d2 it was too white, btw its just a personal opinion.
liked the way you've managed to do differents effects over the clip.
and the transitions were great.
the clip fits perfect with the "rock style" darks/desaturated colors and camera shakes or various effects.
You have my vote for this fight man :)
the ThasIsAll clip wasn't good enough
you have to improve a lot.
it doesn't have a great flow or great continuity beetwen frags and cameras.
Also a very long intro in my opinion with a thin typography that it's not easy to read.
also seem that you've used the same cc over all the clip too.
and try to work harder on sfx, and maybe to apply some fx to the clip
or maybe a little pan/crop
aanyways, keep growing as moviemaker bro :)
Признаюсь честно, потерял интерес к треку после 1 дня, со мной такое редко бывает. Делал без мотивации, да и доделывал клип не дома, из софта только Вегас был, я сразу знал гавно будет. Под устал малясь, огромное колл-во канцеледов, еслиб не прайд, это был бы один из них. Наверное нужно взять перерыв )
Откровенно говоря обе работы не впечатлили. У tEGO конечно больше драйва, только вот достигался он за счет постоянной смены камер, тряски экрана и мерцаний. Как следствие - фрагов не видно в большинстве случаев. ThatIsAll - сильно проседает темп. Чувствуется, что видео и аудио ряды дружбы не завели, но зато смотрится и фраги видно. В этой работе правильно выбрал направление, темп не за счет мерцаний нужно держать, но ты явно не докрутил.
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great flow and nice cc, but feels like you've used the same cc over the clip
because it fits perfects on train and cpl_mill but in tuscan and d2 it was too white, btw its just a personal opinion.
liked the way you've managed to do differents effects over the clip.
and the transitions were great.
the clip fits perfect with the "rock style" darks/desaturated colors and camera shakes or various effects.
You have my vote for this fight man :)
the ThasIsAll clip wasn't good enough
you have to improve a lot.
it doesn't have a great flow or great continuity beetwen frags and cameras.
Also a very long intro in my opinion with a thin typography that it's not easy to read.
also seem that you've used the same cc over all the clip too.
and try to work harder on sfx, and maybe to apply some fx to the clip
or maybe a little pan/crop
aanyways, keep growing as moviemaker bro :)
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